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Question: A Univerelai also known as a Whoopee!. You like!?
My mother said, I never should
Talk to strangers in the wood
She didn't say, (or did she forget!?)
About talking to strangers on the internet!.
From whence did you spring
And others of your kind!?
Are you real or a figment of my mind!?
Perhaps you exist
In a parallel universe
A place like earth
But, which functions in reverse
When you are sad,
You shout 'Whoopee' and chortle
But when you are happy
You cry quietly by your portal
We pass away,
So you must be immortal!.

Abject apologies for the last few lines!!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I just got my cushion out to read this whoopee!. Interesting to say the least this form! Some suggestions to consider:

L3 (or maybe forgot)
L4 on the net
L7 or figments
L13 and do so chortle
L17 so are you immortal

As usual, these are just my suggestions so take them for what they are worth!. I will look up this form!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whoopee! You do'ed it! (Or should I be sobbing with joy!?)
Mother didn't know about the internet!.!.!.It wasn't her fault!.
We're having fun today! I love it!
Now I must go make sure my husband doesn't fall off the ladder!.!.!.He's cleaning the gutters!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pssssst, Hey little girl!.!.!.!.!. you want some candy!?!.!.!. Psssst!.!.!.!. I have chocolate and mint!.!.!.!.!.!. Psssst, do you like ice cream and cookies!?

hmmm internet isn't much different from the regular way!. I do have candy too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hi Granny - just checking in to your reality!. I like it!. Just sitting here sipping coffee and taking a look at our pink sky!. Lots of wildfires going on up north - the wind is bringing the smoke down to us!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am mourning for joy over your poem!. Would that at least one of our poems would be immortal, or at least last until entropy takes the Universe!. Viva the Internet, as well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com