A poem about a doggie bath.?

Question: A poem about a doggie bath!.!?

Penumbra is going to have his bath,
No!.!.!!STOP!! Doggie!.! Doggie! Please don't bite!
Your body is full of fleas and lice,
OUCH!!! Well fine smelly! No bone for tonight!

P/S: And you sleep outside!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Your poem is okay, but it reads a little awkwardly because of all the internal stops!. Cute concept and the P!.S!. is a nice touch!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats a great poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com