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Question: Read mi poem!?
even thought he gave us pain
we will not die in pity or vain
the sun will not force us dry
the rain shall not make us cry
he may be man but we woman are strong
when he is right we are not always wrong
we are not a storage a bag nor a cave
we fed the hungry and freed the slaves
we mad miracles encore and encore
we ened the depression and won the wars
and sorry mr president we rule the state
i mean look at us we wear dresses and skate
so when ever he says your nothing
laugh and say im the reason your somethingWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow that's really good! You should show your family, I always show my family the poem's I write!. Keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice!.
i like it!.
i want to learn how to write like that!
very very nice job!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

ooh, powerful!!!!!!!! i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow i really like it!!
:D soo powerfulWww@QuestionHome@Com