Another poem!?

Question: Another poem!!?

scraped glass and zig-zag shapes
draw an outlined sunset

hungry birds hide in the corners
ringing their beaks at bikini girls
eating with their mouths open
spilling mold

there's a green scent in the air
like rotten seaweed
but when the angry fowls lick the tip of the ice cream cloud

the sky will go blank
and the girls will be goneWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

is good :) its definetly different and i think thats pretty cool n!.n

kudos!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Meeh!.
It Didn't Flow!.
Though The Overall Poem!.
Was Rather!.
Splendid!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't like the bikini part!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com