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Question: My love you will not understand, I must leave you forever, I'ts not because I don't love you!?
It's because our love is too complicated for words, in all of the frustration I have noticed your beauty which only makes it more difficult, you'll never understand flowers that can move and fly, so i'm flying away good bye my fair maiden >>>>---- -->Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Sorry I got totally lost!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Confusing!. It starts out humorous and then I am not sure of your intent!.

Are you planning on arranging your stanzas and adding more to clarify the message!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is nice -
why don't u set it out as a poem - & put more!?

gd luckWww@QuestionHome@Com