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Question: What do u think about this poem and plz b HONEST!!!!!!!!!!!?
what did you do!?

was it ur style, ya smile, the way u chilled wit me a fa while!? the waves in ur hair or the way that u stared or the way u showed that u cared!? how unfair it is to bind me so tightly from an age old bond that still to this day hasnt broken!? or is the admiration that flows or the love that grows or the word that slowly rolls of ur tongue to my ear to send sweet sounds throughout my body!? or could it be that small lil glimmer shimmer of hope that flickers between us, or unseen to us the way our hearts beat at once!?!? crazy!.!.!.!.!.no!.!.!.!.insane!.!.!.!.no!.!.!.!.dillusio!.!.!. drunk and feighned wit enfatuation and affection and love and admiration!.!.!.!.yesssssssssssssss!.!.!.haha more than one word to describe it u cant hide it but then again what is it!?!?!? is it the lil things u do or how u stay tru wheneva ur around, or is it the way u dont hold back from me!.!.or is it!.!.!.!.or maybe its!.!.!.or it could just be!.!.!.that i love youWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It`s really nice!. Sounds like aR&B song!. You should re-type it in the style poetry is written!. Line 1, skip a line, then line 2, etc!.
the way it's typed almost made me skip your question!. it`s typed sloppy but the lyrics are good!.
I love the rhyme!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's quite good!. if your trying to show the poem in a more upbeat, and hip way then it is good!.!.meaning the language!.!.!.!.!.depends how you see it!.
i think it sounds more like a song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i want a poem to save giant panda from extinctionWww@QuestionHome@Com

Great!! while reading it i could feel all of the emotion coming through!. real and honest!.!.!.i give u a starWww@QuestionHome@Com