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Rudy Reddington part 2

What's this I see!? A traffic jam!?
A bottleneck I spy!.
This tunnel has a narrow space,
And now I can see why!.

The walls have swollen in not out,
It hampers what I do!.
I must deliver to the brain,
Oh, yes, I must get through!.

Send a message to the heart,
Please send me precious speed!.
But do not get the pressure up,
We don't want him to bleed!.

I must get through, there is a need,
The brain needs oxygen!.
The pain for lack of my sweet food,
Will border on a sin!.

Oh, look, it's going down a bit,
I'm squeezing past the crowds!.
I'll give the brain euphoric high,
Just like the big white clouds!.

This has been rough but it is through,
For now all is okay!.
But I must be aware that it,
Will come again some day!.


Rudy is a red blood cell who wants to talk when I have a migraine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Nope not too long!.!.!.!.!.and a salutary lesson to all of us!.
Man, you've got natural rhythm!.

(ps I misread your response to my kid's poem!.!.!.!.I thought you were going to tell on me!!.!.!.as kids do)Www@QuestionHome@Com

In every cloud there is a silver lining!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No it is not too long, KudosWww@QuestionHome@Com

A bloody good muse, if you ask me!.!.!.(",)
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