Critique This Poem: What Is A Kiss?

Question: Critique This Poem: What Is A Kiss!?

What is the secret of a kiss!?
It is this something you do not miss!?
When the lips stick with lips
When there is awe and little hiss
The kiss is a boat in memory lane
You can have it in the river or plain
You can feel it deep and sweet
You can taste it as a honey and treat
So you know now what is a kiss!?
It is something you should not missWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

that's remarkable!

Much more flowing and interesting than my poems!.

I give it a 9/10

Great work, keep it up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I say a 5 out of 10!.!.!.!. for y/a poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you need to get the rhythm right!.
but overall, it's pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com