What do you think of the stanza below? (poetry)?

Question: What do you think of the stanza below!? (poetry)!?

Tick-Tock

tick tick tick the clock hands race
one by one they pace their space
they never rest and never sleep
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

why tick tick tick!.!.!.!.why not !.!.!.!.!.tick tock tick !.!.!.!.
anyway i will teach this one to my children at school!.!.!.!.!.i really like this one!.!.!.!.!.thanks!.!.!.can i use this on my own class!.!.!.please!.!.!.!.!.i will name this of course after you!.!.!.!.thanks again!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com