If we're doing kids poems. How about this?

Question: If we're doing kids poems!. How about this!?

The truth about childhood!.

The playground's almost empty
There's only you and me!.
The wind is howling round my legs
Teacher's having tea!.

I've a treasured Pokemon card
I'll swop it if you like
Only, don't tell Mr!. Sweeting
It was me what broke his bike!.

I jumped off the bike-sheds
Doing my Spiderman dive
I didn't mean any harm by it
And I'm lucky to be alive!.

I've a treasured Pokemon card
You can have it if you like
Just don't tell Mr!. Sweeting
It was me what broke his bike!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Mr!. Sweeting!!!!
Mr!. Sweeting!!!!
Mr!. Sweeting!!!!
Mr!. Sweeting!!!!

I know who broke your bike!!

I did it, Grannyjill was nowhere around!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very well done! If you have quite a few Poems you should try to get them published! you should get a copy-write on your Poems prior to sending them to a prospective Publisher! www!.yourcopywriter!.net can help with the copy-write! The line that says > It was me WHAT broke his bike,should be written this way! > It was me WHO broke his bike! Good Luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

the poetry of children is often times more substantial than anything we write!. We should use their voices more often!. They do not get all full of themselves!. we tie ropes of pretence around our words
I think you and TD have inspired me!. I will go back there for a while , play in the sand, jump rope, learn to whistle!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

When I was a little Japanese boy, "Pokemon" meant "Hey, Fatso!"Www@QuestionHome@Com

As he leans over - cupping his mouth with his hand and whispers - "Just don't tell !.!.!.!.!."!. - Great Visual!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is perfect - kid's thoughts and how they would speak and relate to their friends!. I like the little story too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great fun! Keep your Pokemon card, and don't tell that it was me what put salt in the sugar bowl!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ahhhh, the pictures of youth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

good! ^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com

What is it with poems on Y&A!. This one is ordinary!. My 4 yo daughter could have done better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I promise I won't tell!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

great jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ah a bribe huh!? lol dont worry I got your back, I wont tell=)
10/10 loved it!=)Www@QuestionHome@Com

took me right back!. true as true can be!.

and neon!.!.!.what's pokemon!?!? come ON!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Funny!. What's a Pokemon!? lol Baseball cards is what I bribed with!Www@QuestionHome@Com