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Question: Can you tell me how this peom is!?
~DEAD~

stop my breathing
make me die
slit my throat
make me cry
cut my wrist
i swear ill lie
crash my car
i wont ever stop you or even try

i will brake down
right in front of you
you will see me suffer
swear its true
i wont ever tell of
the things you do
because i believe in my dead body
and i believe in yours toWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it's pretty nice and the flow is quite good!.

can you rate mine!?
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wow
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I LOVED IT
its really amaing and dont listen to anyone who tells you other whys!. you could turn into someone famous then theyed eat there words!. i might have left of to in the last sentence!. but that doesn't matter cause it was amazing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You can't always best peoms on death so much!. You got to start off with something else then slow work your way to death!. And it aways a good a idea to start with something happy and make it something sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a confessional poem that makes me worry for your well-being, but poetry is more than rhymes and breaks; where is the poetics!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

whoa!.!.!.its emotional!.!.!.and talentedWww@QuestionHome@Com

depressingWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow deep!.!.!.and emotionalWww@QuestionHome@Com

u need to see a therapistWww@QuestionHome@Com