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Question: Poem!.!.!.let me know what you think!?
this one is a bit older(as in a year ago lol) but let me know what you think!.!.!.!.btw i write ALOT!.!.



Sometimes I feel sad and sometimes I feel blue
but whenever I see you, I'm as happy as can be
for you bring a smile upon my face
and a feeling of joy within my heart
you're like my sunshine in the morning
and my stars that glow at night
you're like the waves in the ocean
the cool breeze in the wind
like the call of the birds in the morning dew
like the sounds of beauty in the night
you see all of these things are of beauty and love
that's how I feel whenever you are near
for it was the passion and desire from both of us
that opened up the world for our eyes to see
for our love of each other will grow and grow
and our needs and desires will be more everyday
for a friend you once were and will always be
has turned into love as it should have been
so I want you to know as a friend and lover
that in my heart and arms you'll always stay
for our love for each other will never fade!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
beautiful, truly, just watch you made it all one sentence ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think this is a nice poem to give to your lover!. I would not consider it contest material, but then not all poetry has to be contest material!.!.!.sometimes you're writing for someone close to you and cliche's don't really matter!.!.!.what matters is that you communicate your emotions clearly!.!.!.and this poem does just that!.

!.!.!.keep writingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Such emotion, such desire, such!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com