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Question: Another love poem!.!.!.!.let me know what u think!?
another love poem!.!.!.!.let me know what u think


watching you from across the room
sends searing pain through my heart!.
I think back to a year ago,
when I thought we'd never part!.
My love for you just won't die down -
it just grows with each new day!.
I wish you'd dare to look at me
and hear what I have to say;
"I love you and I want you back
but these words you just won't hear!.
You don't seem to remember them -
all the memories I hold dear!.
You were my first kiss, my first love
and now you don't even care!.
how could you just blow it away!?
We were the perfect pair!.
you seem content to let me go -
youre doing fine as you are,
while I'm still missing how we were!.
We had the best love by far!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow better than the other ! 4 sure man that is so good i love it!

and do u just have a natural talent for writing poems!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I’d break it up into about 3 stanzas to give it some structure, and it needs something snappy to finish it with, like

I loved you *****, but what the heck
How’d you like a sockful of sand in the neck!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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its very nice but you could have e made three poems out of oneWww@QuestionHome@Com

awe heartbreakingly good!.!.!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com