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SOFTNESS
Whispered words melt,
passing by,
the thoughts
inside tumble
as you smile
Strands of hair part
as an ear strains
to listen
Softly passing by,
they fall to your toes,
these scattered, whispered words!.
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SOFTNESS Whispered words melt, passing by, the thoughts inside tumble as you smile Strands of hair part as an ear strains to listen Softly passing by, they fall to your toes, these scattered, whispered words!. *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i like softly rather than softness " I can hear you softly" is that a song!? or did you just write it!? this is very quiet and gentle, seductive!.!.!. It could be a mantra!.!. Whispered words melt"Www@QuestionHome@Com "Hi!" SOFTNESS Whispered words melt, passing by, the thoughts inside tumble as you smile (words melted as my mind hits temperature of 42 Degrees Celsius, so therefore I could not perceive or interpret the words you had written)!. Strands of hair part as an ear strains to listen (Pardon, What did you say!?!. I am def, so I could not hear a damn word you said)!. Softly passing by, they fall to your toes, these scattered, whispered words!. (One word that describes me)!. (Delusional) : ) GOOD WORK, I liked it!. : )Www@QuestionHome@Com Romantic Semantics Sweet Nothings How about something simple and elegant like "whispered" This is a romantic and sensual poem!. It's really amazing how you can create such a vivid image in so few words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Either "Secret" of "Gossip"Www@QuestionHome@Com i came up with Gentle Wind!. !.!.which then made me appreciate your 1 word title!. i like your title better actually because of the single word!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The unspoken word speaks volumes, doesn't it!? Lemme go see if I can stir up some silence!.!.!. G' night! *EDIT: It's a beautiful title, and a beautiful poem!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com How about "Taboo" !? All that whispering gives me the idea of two lovers having an affair !?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com "avalanche"Www@QuestionHome@Com Lovely poem, words personified!. I have no suggestion for your title!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Strands of GossamerWww@QuestionHome@Com Gental WhisperWww@QuestionHome@Com the whisperer!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Whisper or the Whisper of wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com I like your title or either Whispered Words or Listening!. nfd?Www@QuestionHome@Com Sorry, I think the title is perfect!. A wonderful love poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Name the poem after the woman's name!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Fried Chicken!.Www@QuestionHome@Com `The Question Is Blowing in the Wind;' or frankly I would just stick with `42!.'Www@QuestionHome@Com What about "Music of Words"!?Www@QuestionHome@Com "Secrets" This poem of few words says quite a bit!Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it just as it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |