Poem...any comments?

Question: Poem!.!.!.any comments!?

a poem that i just feel its unfinished!.!.!.!.any comments!?

i am weak now
having attempted to
cry out all feelings and
emotions for you:
In one breath you
make me smile and cry
in one phone call you
lift my spirits and
plunge me into depression
Your voice can build up
my hopes and shatter my dreams
You leave me wondering, yet
disenchanted!.
How you do it,
I'll never know!.
And that you do it
I'll never breathe a clue
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

That was very good!. Sometimes poems left unfinished are fine that way but if you want to end it, go ahead and end it!. I really did love it though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow very good
i really liked it

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I like it, man!. It's raw and emotional, keep it up while you're inspired!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

not bad!.i always like a good poem!. thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com