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Question: Please rate my poetry!.!.!.!?
Life without you, isn't a life worth living!.

Never know what love really was
when life came to a turn
a new life started

she came with a diety power
the power of love
love that changed my life
that gave me a feeling of an
angel caring for me
an angel dreaming about me evry single night of the life
an angel who was the
whole world for me

closed my eyes everynight
the angel enters and falls in my tears
my hand moves to save her
every single tear , i fear
i fear the tear
coz she is in it
whom i never wanted to lose
never wanted her to step out of my life

promises throughoute the world
were made by me
i was addicted to someone
i knew

one night , i held the angel
in my arms
so tightly that i was sure that
she ll never flew away of my life

i said "even if my dreams break"
"i don't care"
"even if i m forced to death"
"i don't care"
"but if i'm forced to get you out of my heart"
"i care"
"i care"
"i care"Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
WOW! I love it! Especially the last stanza! Umm!.!.!.in the second last stanza, shouldn't it be she'll never fly away from my life!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is very good!.thank,s!.i lave it very much,Www@QuestionHome@Com