my friend visits me
and the moon in my window
is his calling card
Pedants note: lower case, no punctuation, has multiple meanings, moon will do for "seasonal reference" ( a la Harvest Moon)!. So what say the crits!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
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and the moon in my window is his calling card Pedants note: lower case, no punctuation, has multiple meanings, moon will do for "seasonal reference" ( a la Harvest Moon)!. So what say the crits!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Myles makes me smiles and he pleasures all my wilds hey i try give me that I don't know what the hell your talking about !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Daffodil smiles On the children in the park Needing their mothers (No pretense) Lazy, hazy moon Smiles on the propane grills In a timid wayWww@QuestionHome@Com Just thoughts of birds, bees and variations thereof work for sigmund freudWww@QuestionHome@Com Quite nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com nice i love haikus good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com |