Poem,comments on Iggy ?

Question: Poem,comments on Iggy !?

have a pet iguana
turns on the lights
in my house
His name is Iggy
has blue eyes
Named after that dude
From Detroit city
Who prances & dances
on stage
Lust for life
And China girls
Raw power
Get him started
Maybe later, well both
Get to meet David Bowie
He”s funny at public ceremonies
Iggy struts his stuff
Changing colours
People come in to watch him
Jump through fire hoops
He”s just fooling around
Trying to act like his name sake
Iggy the clownWww@QuestionHome@Com

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lovely write up of poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think you forgot the "I" at the beginning of your poem!. Your poem might also benefit if you extended the lines by combining the short lines!.!.!.it would keep it from being so choppy!.!.!.like this:

I have a pet iguana!.!.!.
turns on the lights in my house
His name is Iggy!.!.!.
has blue eyes!.!.!.
named after that dude from Detroit city
Who prances and dances on stage

As you can see I'm not saying to combine "every" line pair, just those that flow into one another!.

Cute poem!.!.!.keep writingWww@QuestionHome@Com

um!. ya!. i think you gotta be more pure to yourself
or with yourself!. i don't know how to explain it!. but you want it to be more of a reflection of your soul almostWww@QuestionHome@Com