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Question: Posting again, sorry!.!.!.!?
Lover of Insanity

We stand on the brink
Between life and death
Seeing two worlds at once
And living with each breath!.

We live amongst beauty
We live amongst pain
This world is our masked reality
From what I've seen, it is all the same!.

We are fed lies for dinner
We digest them easily
For the world in which we live
Is too dire to live truthfully

My life is full of the sweet sounds
Of love and happiness
Yet my sleep is haunted
By a world of horror and madness!.

I am the mistress of war
I am the lover of insanity
I watch the world from a sweet embrace
I am the savior of humanity

My eyes search with yearning
The object of my desire and lust
My journey is filled with the rotten corpse
Of freedom, replaced with the infant of distrust!.

They will take me!.
I am but a prophet
In a world with no future
If they can, they shall stop it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I am but a prophet
They will take me if they can
From this world that holds no future
What kind of punishment is that!.

I like your stuff!. I would change rotten to rotting but otherwise I can hear you loud and clear!.

PS Don't be sorry! Its a pleasure to read something of value!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Of course it doesn't work!.!.!. it doesn't match the rhyming scheme you've developed up to that point!.

this will take me today
I am a prophet for it
in a world left with no days
I know what I've seen, and I can't forget

their hands seek my cure
to stop the words in my throat
but my song's for the future
and you can't silence hope


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Hmm!. Where did that second stanza come from!? Oh, well, hope you liked it!. =)


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