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Question: Comment and Critique my Small Collection of Poetry!?
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^ This is a small collection of poems (I'm working on some more additions) that I would really like some more feedback on!. Any takers!? I'd really appreciate some comments and critiques; I just want to see what y'all here think!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A Rummage 'sale' of thoughts was just that!. I 'bought' all of your statements, and thought them to be sophisticated and intellectual!. Your words are more philosophical than poetic!.
Maybe you should think about changing your preferences!?
Chapter 4 was my favorite!. The self contentment from reading a book is honestly enjoyable!. If you ever write a ever philosophical book, I would want to be the first in line to read it!. You have a gift!. I think your spacing of words was not necessary!. I would have read your work if you had written it as a thesis!. I already think of you as an inspiration, and almost as person who knows life, and how to live better, and guide the sails of emotions towards harmony and peace, and for those reasons I am a true fan of your work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com