Position:Home>Poetry> I'm somewhat of a novice-critique my poem please?

I wrote this for a friend, she has a thing for good ear:

Ear
Earplay
Earsniff, do anything with!.

Ear,
Earplay,
Ear rub, till it's a nub!.

Ear,
Earplay,
Ear lick, till it makes you sick!.

Ear,
Earplay,
Ear touch, thank you much!.

Ear,
Earplay,
Ear jab, just a little dabWww@QuestionHome@Com

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