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each morning u make me new u send my enemies many ways and has givin me so many days when i said wheres the love u said u need to look above when i said Jesus will You come into my heart i heard You when You said ok!. and that was just the start Oh! my Beloved though i have made so many mistakes Please dont take Your hand off!.!.i want to be what You make I love You and I need YOUWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Dear most affectionate the great CHILD I am so happy to join you again with your poems!. It is quite interesting and impressive too! This poem is between you and the great Jesus!. Your poem can be divided in to two parts!. Question and answer! You are placing so gently all your problems one by one like sun rise ending the same by appealing before the great Jesus to forgive all your mistakes wish to be in his raditions!. Please note dear child, the GREAT JESUS IS ALWAYS WITH YOU!. He is an instrument for all your thoughts!. Let us all hold his fingers and follow him!. You are a only one luckiest person on this universe in other words gifted child because you always accept all your mistakes openly!. If you say India, people immediately re collect the great father of our nation MAHATMA GANDHI!. Do you know why he got the title of MAHATMA!. Atma means soul, Mahatma means great SOUL!. He never hide any thing, he talked only truth!. Similarly You are a only one person on this universe next to our Mahatma Gandhi!. I observe in all your questions, always admitting all your mistakes openly and praying GOD to forgive you!. Please note, you will be taken care of by the great Jesus at all times!. You are fully protected by our great Jesus!. You are under the radiations of our great Jesus!. You are fully taken care of by our great Jesus!. So please be happy!. You are a role model for us!. You are going to write so many books!. Sun never sets it is glowing on the other parts of this world!. I am re composing your same poem without changing any letters read and enjoy!. You needed me hence I love you You are made for me for what i want I will not take my hands off Mistakes! so many you have made Oh! I am in your heart always hearing your voice Always look above, love your enemies, where I am So many days you have given me each morning i make you without enemies I praise you for your honesty! I love you and I need you! Summary: I just re typed your question not answered your question at all!. Thanking you and praying GOD to give the same relationship at all times!. Yours affectionately ever loving and remembering Lion Dr S Sekar IndiaWww@QuestionHome@Com I like how the first two lines go The praying has been few each day made you feel new Then the lines 5 and 6 for it talks about love This poem is about the lord because you are asking for forgiveness by asking him to come in your heartWww@QuestionHome@Com I'll praise you!!.!.!.Your poem is really sweet and heartfelt!.!.!.are you writing about your religion!.!.!.or someone who has passed!?!?!.!.In any case!.!.!.I think your poem is great!.!.!.!.And if it's your first attempt at writing one!.!.!.well!.!.then!.!.!.!.WOW!!! Keep up the good writing and you'll just get better and better! :) :)Www@QuestionHome@Com I LIKE IT!!!! It's like you're saying that even though you don't pray you always ask him to stay but you still have love for the person above!!! HAHA!!! I made a poem thank you! =]Www@QuestionHome@Com Rock on!. It's nice, good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is your first attempt!? Wow, I really like it!. Good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com did u write this!? wow! i like it!. Good job :DWww@QuestionHome@Com |