Can you understand the importance of editing?

Question: Can you understand the importance of editing!?

A before and after look at an "edit" job!.

Inherited traits progression

the atmosspaira…partially devoid black white tone
bipedal primates tactile manipulated
unsalvageable manufactured goods gestrooid videre
bella perennis maturation peaked

poisson procession!? probability…
continuum continuous!?
indeterminate quantity at lowest importance direct cognition question of method
and of homo sapiens!?

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Evolution

the sky…darkened gray
human touched
debris strewn landscape
daisy blooms

renewal!? maybe
survival!?
some at least know how!.
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Can you understand the importance of editing!?

A before and after look at an "edit" job!.

Inherited traits progression

the atmosspaira…partially devoid black white tone
bipedal primates tactile manipulated
unsalvageable manufactured goods gestrooid videre
bella perennis maturation peaked

poisson procession!? probability…
continuum continuous!?
indeterminate quantity at lowest importance direct cognition question of method
and of homo sapiens!?

------------------------------!.!.!.
Evolution

the sky…darkened gray
human touched
debris strewn landscape
daisy blooms

renewal!? maybe
survival!?
some at least know how!.
and of us!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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glow when necessary!. gracious be!.
You are much over my head this morning, this will take hours of pondering!. But yet, the best of the best needs to and do,
edit,edit,edit! Kudos for the puzzle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very funny!. I'm glad that you've 'Dataed' your poem!. It's fun isn't it!? And strangely, I found my finished poems quite appealing in their own right (write)!.!.!.!.but, then I love words!.
Your 'Inherited!.!.!.' is even more obscure that most!.!.!.!.What language is 'gestrooid and is that Latin for 'daisy'!?

Very entertaining and original (both verses)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes up to a point!. But editing too much can kill a poem!. If your posted poem 1 I would have no idea what it was about, more likely I would have thought you have gathered as many big words in a paragraph, poem 2 on the other hand is not badWww@QuestionHome@Com

I don't get it!. Is this a yes or no question!? If so, then yes!. If this is a way to show off your vocabulary, then the question is irrelevent!. If this is a way to show of your vague poem, then Yes, it does need to be edited!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I see!. Editing can change something that is blatantly bombastic bloviation into pretentiously incomprehensible blather!. Well, that is a step up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thanks for the translation!.!.!.I was just about to whip open my dictionary until I saw the after!. Very fun read of a lovely poem!.
I like how even "daisy blooms" can be so technical!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The unedited work at least gives the reader something to do whilst they wade through the murky crocodile swamp of a poetic mind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, I understand the importance of editing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You slay me!.Had a good laugh reading this!.Your vocabulary is enormous!.Thank God you write so that the common folk like me can understand your poetry!.Well done, enjoyed beyond belief!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

K!.I!.S!.S! Mwah Neonman!

OBO Min Poes of the world

let communication
be plain and simple
when it is needed
connect to many
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Now I understand the importance of editing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Argle mcxpe!.!.!.!.!.ahem! Got in at midnight from the coast!.!.!.!.ahem!
Editing is the absolute nerve! to throw out the chaff and keep the wheat!.!.!.das what readers eat!.!.!.!.can't do nothing with the chaff!.!.

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Let's not make fun of Data and Phoenix!. They do the best they can!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW thats amazing!. I need whoever translated this to my best friend so that he/she can translate my final readings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's the spew'it!.!.!.!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your vocabulary at times can go beyond my mental capabilities, but after reading it twice and the invention of a dictionary, I realised that this poem describes the way at times I write poetry!. Occasionally, very occasional, I can write really good poetry and other times like now, when i attempt to write poetry at 2:00AM in the morning, I become that robot droid lacking that substance and poetic technique, and reflect back to neolithic era before man created pen and paper and speak for that matter!.Where my words collide into each other, rather than coexisting in harmonic tunes!.

"LOL,LOL!"

And for evolution, I'm evolving ever slowly in the world of poetry and my typing say the lease, SUX, well and truly!.

one of your words I could not decipher at all, and your vocabulary out did the on-line yahoo dictionary, so this is my question!?

What the hell does atmosspaira mean!?

"I Loved it!.!.!.!.!.!.
Very well written, Creative imagery, covered every angle of the topic with style!. Good job!.
Cheers!. : )

Oh, P!.S: Can you cheeck out my new, slightly funny Haiku/Senryu poem and give me your opinion please!.
Thx!.!.!.!. : )

P!.S!.S: I have left a message for you in the comment box of my resolved (Please LooK My first Haiku!?), please read!. did it this morning!. Got my half hour snooze, ZZZzzzzz and after 20 cups of coffee, I am now revtalized and ready to face the world again, well, until the caffine wheres off anyway!. : )Www@QuestionHome@Com