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Question: One more, what do you think of I Remember!?
song: I Remember:

I see your smiling face
in a picture frame
and for a split second
I cannot feel the pain

I go through your toys
still there on your bed
I squeeze them to me
as I bow my head

as my eyes close
your scent draws near
and in that moment
I go back a year!.!.!.

chorus:
And I remember;
a better time and a better place
And I remember;
blue green eyes on a baby face
I remember;
the sweetest smile, I've ever seen
a time of wonder
where the world was green
It's a special kind of memory,
like the first snow in December;
every now and again
I take a moment, and I remember!.!.!.

I see your tiny arms
reaching out to me
I pull you so close
so soft and tenderly

I know it's not real
I'll never get to hold you tight
but it's just one of the things
that gets me through the night

So I come into your room
and make time for the tears
let all my memories flow
as I go back a year!.!.!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is one of the most touching and sweetest of poems or songs!. Honestly, you are great! You have improved dramatically since first I read your poems of a week or so ago!. Makes me wonder, is it a poem for all mothers or is it personal!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is really a beautiful song!. And it brought tears to my eyesWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sad!. Captivating!. Nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Country music!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Really sad!!!Keep on going!Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG that`s so said!. I hope you have your stuff copyrighted!. I haven`t posted none of my poerty on here!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i liked it!.
you're good at writing!.
im not really for the whole rhyming thing, but you made it work well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com