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Question: This poem had a sex change operation in Minnesota!. It is still very sad, no!?
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Loneliness is measured
in feet…sticking out of the covers, two
Coffee for one
Each pause turns to a reflection, love
She’ll be standing there, sandy hair
Tall and thin
Friends ask how you are, restrained
With a faraway glance, you’ll say ‘Fine’
Each time
Frozen memories, frozen in time
Images of such a bright smile
Lived…and Laughed
We all miss her so, we are with you
Tonight, in the cold, see us there
One hundred feet under the covers…
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Perfectly describes that feeling after a loss, frozen in time before life begins again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This one tugs at my heartstrings!. The first four stanzas were so sad, describing the loneliness and forlornness that comes with loss!.!.!.and then the last stanza was so sweet!. "One hundred feet under the covers," what would we do without our friends and loved ones standing by to help and care, even if not physically there, they are always truly "with" us!. Great piece of writing, TD!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is so very poignant and touching!. Loneliness is measured in myriad ways but this is certainly an eloquent one!. You certainly have a gift for evoking emotions with your words!. This one made me sad and think about what I should be grateful for!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I remember reading this one!. It is still very touching!. I love "one hundred feet under the covers!.!.!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
The powerful content of this poem is such that it is easy to ignore how fine the technique is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Haunting!. Sad!. I can identify with this, since my sister lost her husband last year!. Even though you have changed the gender I still feel the loss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is still very sad although the reference eludes me!. The images of distance and cold are haunting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I don't know about sex change operations but this sounds like they lost someone near and dear, death!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Poignant!. The last line superb!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Not sad, bitter/sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, it is sad and very lonely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
we grew up, we poets, with poems for bodies so we could embrace each others brains!.
how extraordinarily sweet!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Memories!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Always makes sure our loved ones are still with us
The last two stanza's !.!.!.!.!.!.For me!.!.!.!.!.!.!. Bring it home
As always !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Keeps me thinking !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Right or !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Lived!.!.!.and laughed" is the line to focus on!.!.!.!.
Now you've got me thinking!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i actually quite like this !!!
well done !Www@QuestionHome@Com