Tell me what you think of the poem i wrote. It no finished but almost.?

Question: Tell me what you think of the poem i wrote!. It no finished but almost!.!?

Its called Equality and its a two person poem!. Tell me what you think!.

Person 1
I’m an average looking person,
In an average looking world,
Filled with average looking people,
Leading average little lives!.
But when you put it all together,
And stand us side by side,
You can see I’m much less average than the person I’m beside!.

Person 2
I am much more less than average,
I’m a waste of human life!.
But I live in an average world,
Where people lead such nice lives!.
And when you put it all together
When you stand us side by side
You can see I’m much less average than the person I’m beside!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

God! I flipping love it!!! I wouldn't have put it on here someone could steal it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that is a awsome peom so far and its so true about the world these days i like it alot and im very into poetry so keep up the good work and i would love to see the finishing of it!.!.!.
***ShortiE****Www@QuestionHome@Com

very good
but my advice is that you could probably have the first one more of a higher class instead of average to contradict the second personWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's very unique, but a little confusing!. Maybe you could change much less average much more different!.!.!.!.make your point a little clearer and it should be great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

interesting!. cool!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Kind of Average!. But I believe eventualy your glimmer will become a beacon in the night!.

Keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it!!! it's great !!!! keep up the good work
and keep writing more poems!. keep it in a folder
and maybe u could publish a poem book u never
knowWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

boring, cliche, overdone
i've seen so many of these it's not even funnyWww@QuestionHome@Com

not bad!. i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

WOW!!!! thats really good !.!.!.!.!.!.thats the best poem i've ever seen im dead serious :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is prity good and i like the riming keep u the good workWww@QuestionHome@Com