Please LooK My first Haiku?

Question: Please LooK My first Haiku!?

What do you think, provide honest opinions please!.

cold moist icy pole
climb ascending puffy white clouds
Winter adventure

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

5,8,5

icy pole, moist
climb, ascending puff white clouds
winter adventure

Playing outside in a snowdrift at the park!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don`t know much about haiku`s, and they never really interested me, but it sounds good too me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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