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Question: What do you think of this poem!? EASY 10 points!!!!?
Death's Awakening


Whispered by the winds breath that sudden happening took my dreams away
along with my first love
troubled at night as i toss and turn within my sheets,
i pray
to be only his-
as lifes dark shadow swallows my awakening!.

just wanting to go with him
and tears are scrolling down my face
to love without loss- to understand what its like for once in my life- to be loved in return

time kills all in mortals forgotten loss
awakening the first dream swept days of all of souls core eternity!.!.!.

carried away by crows
as they begin to pick at the throbbing flesh
of my once only security!.
this is what nightmares linger in
this is what destroys hope from all taken within thee!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
[Says this like Harry Potter]

"Thats reeeally good!"

Hah I love that kid no but srsly it is: ]Www@QuestionHome@Com

its beautiful it really changed my life right nowWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'll admit its well written, but not with much flow!.
Sorry, but it just doesnt stand out from other poems, it sounds a bit like something i've already heard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com