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Question: Would you tolerate another of my poems!?
Mach 1, speeding up to mach 2!.
Fly carefully, lest the red planet rocks you,
Or mocks you!.
So journey through the heart of a poet!.
Landing on the Euwaite Field, so don't blow it!.
The captain's voice sneaks,
From the speakers to speak,
Rather quickly,
Like his mouth has just sprung a leak!.
The seat belt signs do a flash dance!.
Donna Summers must be singing our Last Dance,
Maybe this is my last chance!.
To orbit around under billions of stars,
Before I make a crash landing on Mars!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You're killing me!. I have been busy!. I almost missed this!. Did you get "War and the Poet, Richard Eberhart" from the library yet!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great, now I got that song stuck in my head!. Toot toot beep beep!.

Great space tale!. More poetry should be written about the Red Planet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We tend to tolerate that which we like much more than that which we don't!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Absolutely!.!.!. I would love to and it is not tolerating, it is called enjoying!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A rap about landing on Mars! A first! We will never crash; we will make a soft landing, I promise you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this was exciting!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah!.!.!.i think so!.!.!.coz your poem is fun to read!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com