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Question: Wrote this 5 min ago, what do u think!?
I've been pondering why people oftentimes are not themselves-
this is what I got!.!.!. A poem

Bright eyes,
Looking beyond white lies,
And words told with a foot underwater!.
Unrelenting smiles,
Wrapped up in a movie make-up cacoon,
Hanging from the thread
of a lopsided branch!.
Minor moments seeming
Meaningful,
Wordy phrases
And silences that
Fall short of merely scrathing the surface
Of the falling away,
Pottery broken into a thousand fragments,
Glued together by a plastic smile!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it, and can see exactly what you were saying, very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great poem! It accurately describes "the pretenders"!.!.!.always putting on a show!.

Thanks for sharing =)

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I really like this, beautiful metaphors that you used!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great metaphors!. Very deep and clear!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wooow!.!.!.!.its great! good job keep up the good work! :PWww@QuestionHome@Com

awesome!.!.!.thats really good
i love ur metaphors and wordingWww@QuestionHome@Com