A poem of truth inspired by Elaine P.?

Question: A poem of truth inspired by Elaine P!.!?

How can a man of friends and friendliness,
Be alone in his loneliness!?
Secretly depressed and opressed,
By his directness!.
Should I digress!?
For I confess that my happiness
Intertwined in a mess of joylessness,
Not hopelessness!.
I'll supress,
Better yet I'll express
Feelings of hope and seek happiness,
And build a fortress
From the mortars of togetherness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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We all feel lonely sometimes!. My virtual family has helped me through a very dark period of mourning and has led me to the other side!. The first time I laughed aloud after my husband's death was at a "thingy" by TD!. I have laughed, cried and felt love again because of people like you!. The pursuit of happiness is guaranteed by our Constitution!. By seeking happiness, you are showing patriotism!. Seriously, as I have been told many times on this site, you are NOT alone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I know she will love this, as i do!. A wonderful work!.

Elaine as inspired me also, and my poetry i know has grown immensely because of her insightful words (sometimes i think she doesn't even realise, how inspirational and motivational she is)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very lovely, yet melancholy poem with a great message!. I often feel this way!. I love your rhyme scheme which makes it a joy to read, but what I really love is the feeling of hope!. "!.!.!.build a fortress From the mortars of togetherness!." is a great line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Elaine is a powerful inspiration to so many of us!.

Your poem is delightful -- each line rhyming!. I love the ending
-- and build a fortress / from the mortars of togetherness!.

T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is an exciteing poem full of life and passion and i love it so!.Elaine is a great lady and she always has a kind ear to listen and insperation to many here and abroad i;m sure!.Kudo's to you and Elaine; Semper FI !.!.!.!. ALWAYS !.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your poem has the right, positive attitude!. Reaching out to others is of paramount importance!. Depression is nasty and a lonely state!. I consider Elaine my teacher!. I have learned much from her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

From the mortars of togetherness!. Unity! a wonderful vision
of hope!. powerful poem Kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great words inspired by a great lady!. Elaine is a great inspiration to us all!.
As much as I love rhyming, I don't think I've ever rhymed 13 consecutive lines!.

Awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's always better to have hope and unity than loneliness!
And I agree with the others: Elaine doesn't know just how inspiring she can be!
A toast to togetherness!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful poem, your last line is perfect! Elaine has been one of the most helpful and inspirational people that I have met since posting here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Elaine is a great mentor! I especially love the last 8 lines!.

a wonderful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yess! Pure finesse! Well done Semper! Touchdown!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really love this, awesome work as usual!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Define Muse---EPWww@QuestionHome@Com

16!.!.!.!. I was busy counting rhyming words when I found your message!. Ageless! flawless! good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com