A Poem - Especially For Reenie - Fast Horse - Do You Like?

Question: A Poem - Especially For Reenie - Fast Horse - Do You Like!?

Painted Man

Constant drive of the drums
pound and pounce upon me
Smell of gun smoke and sin
overpower deeply

Fast Horse his given name
sung throughout the mesas
Bare-chested and burnt brown
penetrating senses

Flash floods and wildfires
lightening strikes and dew
Footprints firmly planted
camouflage the viewWww@QuestionHome@Com

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WOW!! Thanks! I'm deeply touched at these powerful words!
Did you know my son is part apache indian!? Very intuitive on your part!.!.!.!.
Thank you!. I will cherish this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

From the very first line there is a pounding sense of heartbeat, of hoofbeat!. You have created a whole world here in this captivating poem!. It is a world I want to visit over and again!. This poem is intense and dynamic!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Put me on a horse NOW and give me the reins!
Yep, this made me ride through a poem, instead of reading it!.!.!.!.and it's damn good when a poem can do that!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Invites imagination of being an observer, as one would watch a movie screen, very vivid picture painted with your pen!.
Kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a really awesome and great poem' and i love it all the way!.Reenie will cherish i know as will everyone who reads it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is simply wonderful your poem flows with power!. Well DoneWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it but I feel there is more!. I await the next poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful poem! I'm sure the half-Apache Marine will love it as much as his mother does!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yep!. I feel like i'm now beside the Marine guy!. Good job! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

A wild, magnificient ride!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You ride your horses well! No steroids either!. ComplimentsWww@QuestionHome@Com