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Dreaming about the Pub
The joy of my sleep relieves me
Yet, I cannot remember my dream
Now I am awake, the pub beckons me
I need ale for my bloodstream
My sleep as made the time spent
I must be quick the doors soon close
My dress, I do not know if I’m decent
No time to check my clothes
There’s my neighbour on his bicycle
He will be rushing there too
“How about a croggy my angel”!?
“What do mean no room for two”!?
I must run, it is almost eleven o’clock
I see my neighbour, just made it inside
While I’m, still on the sidewalk
I’m too late, I’m left outside
Only one option left “Let me in! I cry”
But, the bolt is already across
And while I contemplate the “Oh why”!?
A voice said, “Can I tell you about the Cross”!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i agree with john D ppl do think about Him when its too late!.but i love the poem i think its unique!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Most certainly a worth while theme for a poem, But I think it is lacking some thing, by the 3rd and 4th stanzas, Yet this is only my small opinion!. Blessing Be!.
It is never too late to turn to God, He waits with patience!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
the pub is the most borein places in the world, get a drink sit doen n that it, only sad people are in pubs who are theere everyday cus they got so use to goin n wastin their money n time there, get a better hobby,Www@QuestionHome@Com
I remember the story of Saint Stanley and his bicycle, when he delivered gifts of Gold, Frankincense and Stout!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Good one yeah it seems some people think about God only when it's too late!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Nice poem!. Who's the author!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
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964 with the Pub!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
NONE!Www@QuestionHome@Com
so am i but im not going till tomorrowWww@QuestionHome@Com