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Through the gloom of rain the glow of day began!. Rumbling, sounds of thunder Mrs Wren gives me a dirty look all I did was open the door!. Fat Cat awoke me her boney paws on my chest!. She looks down into my eyes her meow, "Good Morning!." Wish she could make coffee!. Good Morning to all!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Good Morning Coop!. Funny poem!. I remember my cat waking me up in the same manner! She preferred my feeding her, than her making me coffee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is a glorious morning here, but I wish for your rain!.Lovely, funny little poem!. Give FatCat a pat and to both of you, good morning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Good morning to you, Coop! When you teach Fat Cat to make coffee!.!.!.tell me how! Despite some of the (I will restrain myself) folks who answered in the negative, I enjoyed your offering!Www@QuestionHome@Com Vivid pictures you paint! Nice, neat, and Good Morningy! Wish I had the storms and animals!.!.!.!.my Manx kitten thinks she's Ms Thang!.!.!.!.heheheheheheeeeeeeeWww@QuestionHome@Com You have neatly painted a wonderful picture and identified the only real short coming in cats!. Wish I could say the same for myself! I really like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I saw your poem With my creases appearing on my forehead I think your poem doesn't make sense For I don't know what you are trying to tell!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You could be a fictional writer, but I'm not sure if this is a good poem!. The beginning started nicely, but it fizzled near the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Out of luck Your poem sucks so do you get a clue Write something funny or forever be begging for moneyWww@QuestionHome@Com You have been hanging around Elysabeth too long!. This is very funny!.Www@QuestionHome@Com ha ha fat cat!. its actually pretty good!. nice job (Y)Www@QuestionHome@Com It seems to appeal to your chosen audienceWww@QuestionHome@Com It sounds kinda awkward to me!. Try making it flow a little better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Mrs Wren sounds meanWww@QuestionHome@Com hmmmWww@QuestionHome@Com Not for me!. soz!.Www@QuestionHome@Com NO!Www@QuestionHome@Com What about you!?You like it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |