Please tell me your honest opinions on my poem?

Question: Please tell me your honest opinions on my poem!?

the optimist says-
that glass is half full!.
the pessimist says-
half empty!.
the grateful one says-
why worry how much!? it's clear that we have plenty!.

the simplist says-
there's more glass than we need!.
the economist says-
pour more!.
the snotty one says-
speaking of this water truly is a bore!.

The artist says-
look at the pretty water!.
The pacifist says-
that water can be shared!.
The alcoholic says-
if it's only water, honestly, then who cares!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Cool!. I would tweak the last line in the second paragraph!. It was hard for me to read easilyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Oooh, I like!. It was not what I first thought it was going to be, I admit, but I like the little rhyme in there as well!. It ties the stanzas together nicely!. I am a fan of this poem!. It probably needs some work here or there as most poems do, but I coldn't tell you where to begin because I'm not very good with concept poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that your ability to compress a whole amount of truisms in a neat and entertaining way is impressive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it! It's an expantion of a classic saying, it's brillent!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think it's cute!.
its true, it has a great flow, and it made me laugh!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

ha, I really liked that, very good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is awesome! its cute, true, creative, and a really good poem!. you should continue to write poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com