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Question: A short titleless poem by a 13-year old author!?
though gold may glitter,
it leaves hearts bitter,
and though diamonds shine,
their gleam can blind!.
Though fur is quite posh,
some animal must pay the cost,
and though your silk is soft to wear,
it is also very quick to tear!.
Though sculpture is fabulous,
pure nature is flawless,
and though surgery may make you pretty,
a life-long mask deserves my pity!.
You offer riches, jewels, and such,
but the wise ones know-
jade can't warm to the touch!.
there you have it! ratings are appreciated, possibly with explanations!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
If this was a painting,-- and you had a critique!.!.!.
I would say, I like the colours, and the
words somehow "speak"!Www@QuestionHome@Com
woah! thats a great and TRUE poem!! i really understand where you are coming from with those words! i give it a 9 out of 10!! beautiful job!. im 13 too and i write poetry when i have intense feelings whether they are good or bad!. if you want to, keep writing, because you have talent =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
you say though alot is thier meaning that goes with that word and the last lines a lirtle confusing with the wording!. But overall it is beautiful!. Good job thier is a lot of passion in it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow thats great! thats really goooddd
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Wow,cool!.I remember when I was 13!.!.!.couldn't right poetry to save my life! XD I'm more into writing!.
Great job though!.You've got some talent!.Keep'em comin'!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com
i give this a 9!
this is actually really meaningful!Www@QuestionHome@Com
pretty brilliant!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow, i love it! post more :) you're very good!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow that was amazing! i give it a 9!Www@QuestionHome@Com