Good Song?

Question: Good Song!?

Is this a good song!? I made it up!.

I thought I knew you, but that all changed
We had a love, but it got rearranged

I once did, but I don't know you
Come with me: I want to show you

The past, the future, the present, the world
You changed this kid into a heartbroken girl
We were so happy but you tore us apart
Your a nasty rude guy who broke my heart
Into pieces

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i really like it!
the nasty rude guy part is funny! its so!.!.!.outspoken!. especially because the rest is like all sad and poetic then you just come out with a "you suck" type of vibe!. love the whole thing! like i said, very poetic!. you have talent!

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"nasty rude guy" sounds a bit immature, but the rest is good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com