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Question: Poetic inspiration finally hit me at 1: 30 in the morning!. How is it!?
Fragile

Thousands of delicate figurines
Of crystal standing free;
Crafted with priceless workmanship form
A glass menagerie!.

Such radiance and beauty of light
As e'er hoped to be seen
Compose the hearts of each creation,
Each fragile figurine!.

Yet one by one they fall and shatter,
Building a shining heap!.
It seems at once these priceless treasures
Were never ones to keep!.

They aren't meant as mere collectibles
Or any untouched token!.
Thousands of delicate figurines,
And all were made to be broken!.

--swooshWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sounds very much like the human heart!.!.!.!.awesome!!!
You did it good, with flair, and all things poetical!.!.!.!.do it again with another fine work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Damn, in my opinion it is quite incredible!. This one is a keeper!. It flows fantastically!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is me clapping for your muse and inspiration!
This is just fantastic swoosh, quite wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is the best!. I loved it!. I am a sucker for perfect rhyming of this calibre and the imagery is great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its a great shame when you get drunk and smash up a lifetimes collection!.
Never mind, try bronzes next time, more robust!.Www@QuestionHome@Com