Divine Being poem.?

Question: Divine Being poem!.!?

Title: Divine Being By Tia Metcher!.
Please provide positive or negative feedbacks!. thx

God is the essence, the fabric, the space,
God is the wind that blows by your face

Good is the oceans, the seas and the rain,
Good is the one, who will heal all pain,

God is the suns luminous Glow,
God is the questions and answers unknown,

God is future, past and present,
God is time, entire assent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Really goood, no criticizm here! But I wood change the good in the 2nd stanza to god, and in the second line maybe "past your face" would sound better than by !. !. !. but that's just me!. All in all it's fluid and has good rythm!

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The second stanza threw me off!. I had to do a double take!.
Was that a mistake what you did there, or was to demonstrate the good in some-things!? I do not know!.
I admire your panthestic view of God being, this whole world, encompassing every motion, being with in every substance!. I have always thought of the world as a divine being, maybe not with the intelligence like that of animal, but still, its an attractive but yet recondite concept that you put under a creative magnifying glass!.
Perfect 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good! You should enter it into a poem contest in one of the writing or poetry journals!. The prize is not huge but the prestige is :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

im a guy that doesnt really like poems but that was one of the best i have ever heard and im all so christan so it was awesomeWww@QuestionHome@Com

the secound thing should be god not good !
but amazing still!Www@QuestionHome@Com