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Arrows fly by, missed,
Flesh kissed, grazed,
They persist,
In the haze,
Hunting me,
I hear them grunt, low;
And I, unslow…run away!.
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PREY Arrows fly by, missed, Flesh kissed, grazed, They persist, In the haze, Hunting me, I hear them grunt, low; And I, unslow…run away!. *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: July 2007 was a good vintage month!. Serve chilled, with some olives!. I like your fragmented work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think it's kinda well done, but give Elaine the points!. I just wonder why all the arrows are hunting you, and who is shooting them!. It ain't me, I don't miss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "Unslow," very Shakespearean!. Could they be Cupid's arrows, by any chance!? Can you give details on this style!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Glad I didn't miss this one, I felt myself with you out there alone on the field arrows zipping by, glad you got away!Www@QuestionHome@Com Whoops! Quick, get the laundry in! (A cartoon that stands out in my mind upon reading this!.!.!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com Hmm, I wonder why the onslaught !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Damn!!! !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.He wasn't suppose to come home this early Sorry bad joke !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.We liked this !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Do you have anymore like it!?!?!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I think Elaine said it bestWww@QuestionHome@Com |