Visual poetry: Could you please critique this Poem?

Question: Visual poetry: Could you please critique this Poem!?

http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=VC56_LkH4!.!.!.

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To anyone who has suffered debilitating pain over a long period of time, this poem will resonate with them!. It struck a chord with me because I've recently started to get pains in my joints!. I've got nothing to complain about, but there are plenty people out there who suffer in silence and whose lives are made a misery because of pain!. And sometimes the cure can be worse to bear than the disease!.

The words spoke to me!. The visuals spoke to me!. I don't know much about poetry, but I do know that the combination of the spoken words and visuals brought home the point in a way that the written word alone would not!.

P!.S!. Loved the voice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked this one and the previous visual poem, but I liked the previous one better!. This one, the pics were just distracting to me, whereas in the other one was lovely!. I understand it was a different sort of poem, and needed different illustrations!. Pain needed the in your face graphics!. Thank you!. Love your wife's voice!. I have friend's in the UK I could listen to forever because of the accent! Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I thought it sounded so appropiate to your situation!. It was a very good discription of what you"re going through!. I think the reason you"ve not had many comments on it is because it concerns something that people who haven"t had dealings with pain & suffering don"t understand it"s value!. Most people don"t suffer anything more than the odd headache all their life!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Loved it and added it to my favs when I have a chance I will go back and listen to others!. It was so much of what you see in everyday life of depression and the voice made it even better sometimes having a poem read to you it makes more sense, i know that when i read my poems out loud to others they feel the meaning and they feel what emotions are in the poem by the way I read it! keep it upWww@QuestionHome@Com

I thought the poem and the video were both very good!. The video is a little amateurish, but I realise what it signified, I to suffer pain in my life, it can be a constant hassle and I identify with the monotony of living with it!. good all roundWww@QuestionHome@Com

actually, you're poem is very good!. call me quite "conservative" but i think your poem is effective enough without the visuals!. though, some of them did connect well with what was being said!. but it did take away from what is being said most of the time!. but that's just me!.

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Awesome, what was great for me is that i know what you are talking about and how you feel about it, really great, it should be used as a commercial for everyone to view !. great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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