A morning poem, what do you think?

Question: A morning poem, what do you think!?

By Dag Drahmr

Travel the large stone path,
!.!.!.!.leads from past to future!.
Silence tickles his ears,
!.!.!.!.dark glory greets his eyes!.
Sol far beyond the horizon
!.!.!.!.sends beams to light the clouds!.
Explosion,
!.!.!.!.of color
!.!.!.!.of sound
nature a wakes!.
Sol comes over the hill!.
"Good Morning,
coffee ready!?"
He knows what's right!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it !.!.!. the beginning seems very 'serious' which makes the ending (Sol asking for a cup of coffee) even better!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, it is 10 minutes past Noon here!. I also watch the sunrise every morning, coffee in hand!. Lovely poem, the poet certainly "knows what's right!." Good Afternoon to you!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good morning!. See that is what the morning SHOULD look like!. Every day is a new one beautiful and striving towards the future!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's 1 pm here in NY!. But, I do have coffee at hand!. Have a good day!. Lovely, fun poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, that's good!! The end is funny!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

No Jimmy Dean microwave meals!? lol Nice one, put a smile on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

all i can say is DAMNNNNNN! that's awesomeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Thats how my mornings go :) Good morning Coop!Www@QuestionHome@Com

makes my morning a liltle better good morning to you tooWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'll read it later, when I find my Cooper ScooperWww@QuestionHome@Com