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Question: And then there were two!.!.!.piles on my desk!. This is another repair job!. What do you think!?
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DANCING WHITE GOWN

Spin around
Dancing white gown
Petticoat promenade
Wind me up and around

White ribbon hair
Brushed cheeks in the breeze
Perfumed skin
Air slowly breathed in

Whirls me around
Dancing white gown
A touch of her hand
Softly, gently captures me

A chill up her arm
Enraptures me
While turning around
Dancing white gown

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I remember this its the cross dressing one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely!. How romantic!. Almost like an ethereal song!.
Pure, soft imagery!. Awesome!. Do another!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Repair finished !.!.!.!.!.!.!.I think it's Sweet & RomanticWww@QuestionHome@Com

I hear the music of your dance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am feeling dizzy!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just who is in the gown!? Elaine, maybe!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

You took my breath away and tears came to my eyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You once used the words "heady" and "euphoric" with regard to a poem!. I now give them back to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You've been in Fishi's crayons!.!.!.!.what a lovely picture!Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice i like how u have the main line in almost every stantza and the message in it is just amazing u get the picture in your head as u read it!! well done!!Www@QuestionHome@Com