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Question: A wasted life!?
All my life I wonderd why
How she could live like this I knew she would die
It started out early as a question of if
But I knew all along the end was coming
I thought she cared I thought she could change
But I was a fool to think she wanted to change
Every day I waited for the end
I prepared my self I thought I was ready
when the day came I looked in her eye
for once in her life there was peace in her life
I wanted to show emotion I wanted to cry
But I could not do this for I was happy insideWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
My answers are poems for that is what we are ether you understand or you ask for more A life is not wasted if understood they rest in peace shall their be more!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
nice peom but that ending to me does not seem to end maybe add something like
now there is no lingering thoughts
nobodys worried she no loger has to change
I now can live my life, knowing she is at peace
brings me to a final place within my own peace!.
Peace of mind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Don't worry be happy!. :DWww@QuestionHome@Com
I wish I would changeWww@QuestionHome@Com
awe (:Www@QuestionHome@Com
could you ryme more please!?Www@QuestionHome@Com