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Question: Just looked at an old song I wrote!.!?
So I wrote this song, I have music for it too, but I'm not a fan!. I wrote this when I was like 15!. Seems like the idea could still work if I changed it up, or had som tips!. Suggestions, thanks, and I think I ripped off an idea from a song in one of the stanzas, but can't remember, just sounds familiar!. Thanks

I'm obsessive compulsive
I do the same things day after day
I make up songs and I
throw them away

Some people say that
My life stands still!.
That I live my life,
But nothing's really real!.

[chorus]:
I'm obsessive compulsive,
rather be romantic impulsive!.
but i am who I am and there's nothing I can do
I'm obsessive compulsive
And so every day I fall in love with you

I try to cry, but it only
comes out as a yawn!.
And on the radio they play
that same old love song!.

In the middle of the night
I wake up scared and I wake up Strange
I wake up afraid of everything staying the same
and fall asleep forever afraid of change!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
" i try to cry but it only comes out as a yawn"
thats basically part of the lyrics in the chorus to Pinch Me-Barenaked Ladies
it goes "It's like a dream - you try to remember but it's gone, then ya
Try to scream but it only comes out as a yawn, when ya"

thats probably what you got from a different song but couldnt rememberWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah it`s good for a song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Weird!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's weird but really good!. you should put it on youtubeWww@QuestionHome@Com

i really like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow thats great
send it in to people they would pay good money for that:)Www@QuestionHome@Com