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Question: Posted this last night, but only got one answer!.!?
The World as we Know It
Why is a sudden death more tragic!?
What are the horrors of an unjust death!?
What is a just death!?
Dying is an ugly business!.

The bodies on the news
Stare at us through the camera!.
With unseeing eyes,
We blink again through long dried tears!.

We've suffered
We've cried
Now we watch
Now we Lie

To ourselves, what do we know
How did we come to be
Like this
What is the value of each human life!.

How can we measure the value
Of Life
Of Love
Of the end of the world as we know it!.

What is beauty
What is worth
What is freedom
Do we leave it to the state

To decide who you are!.
Who you will be
And when
Is the end of facism as we know it!.

There is injustice
There is no one there
To hear
The cries for help

Are calling for worth
for freedom
for beauty
And for the end ot the world as they know it!.

Will we answer
The phone rings
In an empty forrest
No one wil hear it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I really like this poem, it's as if someone is standing there infront of you spilling their opinions, questions and confusion all at the same time!. It's great!.!.!.an emotional journey!

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Me, personally!.!.!.
I love poems with imagery, and rhyme so it was difficult to hold my interest reading this poem!.
I understand what you say and it is nice but it not my favorite type of poem!. also I prefer short poems that get to the point!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah I can see why you only got one answer!.
Too many questions and too many negatives to bother with in one answer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Emotional, Touching!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You didn't really even ask a question!. All you did was post the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you sacrifice a lot to make it fit a rigid frameworkWww@QuestionHome@Com

This poem speaks volumes!!! Do you know that!?! I LOOOOOVVVVEEEDDD IIITTTTTT!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

loved ur poem!. its really deep, emotional, and it speaks!. great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

OK subject of poem aside, i like your poem!. I think it works, however i feel you need to work on the flow of it through verse 7,8,9!. it works and is good but it just seems to flow a little off!. But yeah i like it, please take this as constructive criticism not nasty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com