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Question: I wrote a poem just now, it is just a bunch of whatever came first to mind!?
dancing, prancing, and acting a fool
singing, swinging, and living the cool
what once was lost, can never be found
the hills can be greener, but cant they stay brown!?
the sky can be bluer, a prince can be crowned
as king he will conquer, until he is drowned
drown him we will, and dance again we must
for inside my head, its in which we trust
dancing, and prancing, and acting a fool
singing, swinging, and living the coolWww@QuestionHome@Com


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interesting==it be worked on as a song="Acting a Fool" put some music to it and work it out== but first get an agent=Www@QuestionHome@Com

it almost has the flow of the Fresh Prince of Bel Air song at the beginning!.!.!.!.LOL it's good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

if that just came out of ure head u have a talen tto write,,peaceWww@QuestionHome@Com

LIKE IT!!!!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I like the rhythm!.!.!.!.!. you should make some more!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com