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Question: How's this poem!? It's called "All I See Is You"!?
In the blur of people,
In the misty air,
In the crowded park where people shout without a care!.
I don't pay attention,
I don't have a clue,
I don't see these things cause all I see is you!.
I know the grass is green,
I know the sky is blue,
But right now I just don't care,
All I see is you!.
I see you crystal clear,
I read you like a book,
Your love is like a fishing rod,
I'm caught upon the hook!.
I know your love is pure,
I konw your love is true,
That's why I just don't care,
Cause all I see is you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I love it!. I do alot of Poem writing and many people can't get the hang of it, but you did!. That poem was so good, it described your feelings so well!.!.!. I love it!.!.
Well done and keep up the good poem work!.!.!.
That was the best poem I have ever read, considering I write poems myself!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It makes a hell of a Country song!. After all poetry is basically like writing a song!.!. Make the third lines the refrain!. repeat them and you have it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wonderful !.!.!.!.!.!.!.it is great , and the rhyming words are perfectly placed !.!.i like it very much !.!.!.keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep going !!!
love is not blind, in the contrary !.!.it sees more , and because it sees more, it refuses to see less !.!.!. and here you are seeing more than what others seeWww@QuestionHome@Com
It is very beautiful!. It makes me remember of my past love!.You should write a song on it!. It will be good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its ok, but their most likely cheating on you right now!. My advice dont get to attached to anyone!. Have fun, your bound to get hurt this wayWww@QuestionHome@Com
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!. But im only 11 so i dont know good from bad as my parents would say!. But i really like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
decent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
promising!.!.!.i like the flow!.
simple but nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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You're so in love!.!.!. it's cool!. Brings back beautiful memories to me too!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
pile of shyt !.Www@QuestionHome@Com