My first Haiku since '62. Any help gratefully received.?

Question: My first Haiku since '62!. Any help gratefully received!.!?

In Florida July skies
flaunt promises of
thunder, lightening and rain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Lovely image, but this is not a Haiku!. Although the Haiku has many syllabic variations, the most usual is 5-7-5!. L3 has 6 beats; lightning is a 2-syllable word!. The Haiku is generally not capitalized or punctuated!.

July Skies
by Cynthia S

fickle July skies
in Florida flaunt promise
but do not send rainWww@QuestionHome@Com

Whoah!. Just breathtakingly beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sugoi :)Www@QuestionHome@Com