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Question: My little poem!?
simple, sweet emotion shining through
ever there and ever true
even in the darkest night
this little glow of auditory candle-light
some loud, and some soft
setting waiting spirits aloft
true beauty in a sound
will within souls resound
a laugh!.





this is more of a exercise in rhyming that anything for me!. Rhyming and I are old enemies, and I am currently wrestling to get him under my thumb!. That said, what are your thoughts!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Gee I really like it! Sounds like your winning the battle of wrestling tournament !Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it, you are a good writer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com